Journal Prompt
Thee most disgusting liquid I have ever had in my life would be a V8 drink. One day I was looking through my fridge and noticed a V8 can. Thinking that it was my favorite kind(strawberry banana) I took the can and I went out the door for school. Lunch came around and I was very dehydrated. I couldn't wait to have a refreshing drink. I opened the drink and I took a big gulp of it. From that moment on, there was a feeling of anguish in my stomach. I almost threw up in my mouth. It tasted like cold chicken broth mixed with expired ketchup. I look at the label of the can and in big black letters it said "TOMATO". I was to frustrated to even speak at the time but inside, I felt embarrassed and pain in me!!
2 comments:
You forgot a period at the end and you could've described it a little better but I think you did fine otherwise.
Spell check on the. Past tense look, add ed. So instead of to. Correct punctuation. In me is not necessary. V8 sounds pretty digusting from how you described it so I do not think I'll be trying that anytime soon. I liked how you described V8 and included how you felt afterwards.
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